My Last Day with Mylo (Jan 29, 2025)

 Last day of Mylo.

  I have took care of dog on Rover app. His name is Mylo. I saw him at first, I was afraid of him a litte. Because he looks so powerful (it reveals true) and scared. But now I like him very much and will miss him. 

수정 및 설명

1. "I have took care of dog on Rover app."

• "have took" → "have taken"
  → 현재완료(have + 과거분사)에서는 "took" (과거형)이 아니라 "taken"(과거분사)을 사용해야 해요.
• "dog" → "a dog"
  → 영어에서 단수 가산명사는 보통 a/an이 필요해요. 여기서는 "a dog"가 적절해요.
• "on Rover app" → "on the Rover app"
  → 특정 앱을 말할 때는 "the"를 붙이는 게 자연스러워요. ("on the Uber app"처럼)

✅ 수정된 문장:
       "I have taken care of a dog on the Rover app."

2. "I saw him at first, I was afraid of him a litte."

• "I saw him at first, I was afraid…" → "At first, I was afraid…"
  → "At first"는 처음에는 이라는 의미로, 문장의 맨 앞에 두는 게 자연스러워요.
• "a litte" → "a little" (철자 오류)
  → "litte"가 아니라 "little"이 맞아요.

✅ 수정된 문장:
      "At first, I was a little afraid of him."

3. "Because he looks so powerful (it reveals true) and scared."

• "he looks" → "he looked"
  → 앞 문장이 과거 시제("I was afraid")니까, 일관성을 위해 과거 시제("looked")를 써야 해요.
• "it reveals true" → "which turned out to be true"
  → "it reveals true"는 문법적으로 틀림
  • "reveal"은 동사라서 목적어가 필요하고,
  • "true"는 형용사이므로 그대로 목적어로 쓰기 어려움.
  • "which turned out to be true" (그게 사실로 드러났다)처럼 자연스럽게 수정!
• "scared" → "scary"
  → "scared"는 사람이 느끼는 감정, "scary"는 무언가가 사람을 무섭게 만드는 것을 뜻해요.
  • "I am scared." (나는 무서워.)
  • "This movie is scary." (이 영화는 무서워.)
    → 여기서는 Mylo가 무서운 느낌을 주므로 "scary"가 맞아요!

✅ 수정된 문장:
      "Because he looked so powerful (which turned out to be true) and scary."

수정된 전체 문장

My Last Day with Mylo.

I have taken care of a dog on the Rover app. At first, I was a little afraid of him. Because he looked so powerful (which turned out to be true) and scary. But now I really like him and will miss him a lot.